ledsoul
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Post by ledsoul on Jun 29, 2005 17:31:50 GMT -7
You know its funny, cause as I post this now, it occured to me in the back of my mind that perhaps this was done before, but I just couldnt put my finger on it... anyway... I know there are a few problems with this that Im going to tweak out, but here is a pencil that perhaps you can help me pull apart. .jpg) |
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fiona
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Post by fiona on Jun 30, 2005 0:09:47 GMT -7
That's a really cool idea and pose; the only things jumping out at me are that the spine and legs look too short (compared to the arms), giving him a Puck-like physique.
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MrJohnny
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Post by MrJohnny on Jun 30, 2005 0:16:40 GMT -7
I like the pose as well. Unfortunatlely, I really don't see much of a Flash in there. Looks more like Daredevil.
Sorry I don't mean to offend just give my two cents.
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Chris
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Post by Chris on Jun 30, 2005 8:10:01 GMT -7
It's probably because the costumes are so similar ...
cool idea.
So, does that mean he's a blind guy traveling at light speeds? Scary
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ledsoul
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Post by ledsoul on Jun 30, 2005 11:07:55 GMT -7
Hahah, No offense is taken Johnny. I knew that would become an issue with the pencil. The flash part will have to be worked out in colour with the yellow bands and bolts. Its a challenge to combine the two.
I have another sketch of him holding his head after hitting a light pole at high speed... Ill probably rework it and scan it later. hahah
The foreshortening is a little problematic for me, Im going to rework that, especially where you mentioned Fionna, the leg in particular. Just at the moment Im travelling to see me mom after coming out of hospital. I should be back online friday... late...
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ledsoul
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Post by ledsoul on Jul 2, 2005 23:21:52 GMT -7
OK I tweaked it a little and then touched it a bit more online... (alas I didnt go out and buy those technical ink pens.) I think I fixed the foreshortening by lengthening the buttocks and leg, and better defined his head... shrug the flash part shows better in the colour... .jpg) .jpg) |
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fiona
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Post by fiona on Jul 3, 2005 17:20:01 GMT -7
Way way better! Good stuff.  |
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Post by CogNoman on Jul 5, 2005 9:56:57 GMT -7
You know, I had no real problem with the 'Puck-like' physique in the original one. I thought it was kind of unique, heh heh.
When I look at the new one and THEN look at the original, though, whoa, yeah, it looks way better with these human proportions.
Good job- you really do know your anatomy and proportions really well.
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